Dear snow white this is your sister. I have just finished reading your story but I need to tell you things .Why do you eat an apple that just stupid to eat an apple and you should not go to the strangers house because it is bad to go strangers house.
You should listen to the little men to close the door but you don’t listen to him.
Here are some questions:
1 The kiss that you had did you like it or you didn't like?
2 Why did you go to the strangers house.
3 Why did the animal take you to the strangers house.
From your sister.

Hi Jemima
ReplyDeleteReally like your story about snow white and the part part I read was when
you said that it is really bad to go to a strangers house.
Good Job Jemima
Hi Jemima I like your letter to Snow white and I like how you said that it is bad to go to Strangers house and I like how you said why did you eat the for the strangers.
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